Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival 2010 Haiku Invitational Winners
Michael Dylan Welch, Judge
The Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival is pleased to announce the following winners of its 2010 Haiku Invitational. The top winners in each category are featured not only here, but also in Rice Paper magazine, Haiku Canada Review, and Ripples, the newsletter of the Haiku Society of America. These five top poems will also be read at a spring 2011 performance of the Vancouver Symphony Orchestra, and will appear on TransLink buses and SkyTrains in and around Vancouver in the spring of 2011. In addition, this site presents many dozens of additional Sakura Award winners and honorable mentions, all celebrating cherry blossoms, along with commentary from the judge. Congratulations to all the winners, and thanks to everyone who entered for helping to celebrate spring and cherry blossoms. We hope you’ll enter again next year! You can also read comments on the top five winning poems by 2010 Haiku Invitational judge, Michael Dylan Welch.
biopsy . . .
but just for today
cherry blossoms
Laryalee Fraser, Salmon Arm, British Columbia
holding hands
for the first time
cherry blossoms
DeVar Dahl, Magrath, Alberta
a sudden hush
among the children
cherry blossom rain
Melissa Spurr, Joshua Tree, California
cherry trees in bloom—
if only I could stop
the wind
Lucas Garczewski, Poznan, Poland
the inspiration
for my wardrobe choice today—
pink cherry blossoms
Rukshila Dufault, age 17, Port Coquitlam, British Columbia
British Columbia
Sakura Awards
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Cherry blossoms
out my office window
I change my shoes
Rita Ager
Coquitlam, British Columbia
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new puppy
the backyard swing
full of blossoms
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia
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Sidewalk cafe
cherry petals garnish
my espresso
Jeff Crawford
Surrey, British Columbia
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Silky white train
Brushing cherry blossoms
Into its folds
Elaine Dare
Burnaby, British Columbia
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cherry blossoms
tomorrow
we part
Tom Drescher
Rossland, British Columbia
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pulled over for speeding
I roll down the window
to cherry blossoms
Raoul Fernandes
Vancouver, British Columbia
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limping back to my bike
cherry blossoms
on the spinning wheel
Raoul Fernandes
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
unmarked infant graves—
a sudden release
of cherry petals
Vicki McCullough
Vancouver, British Columbia
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stock market
spiraling down . . .
this cherry petal
Vicki McCullough
Vancouver, British Columbia
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cherry blossom—
even the sunset
lingers
jill stanley
Victoria, British Columbia
Honourable Mentions
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old pond—
falling cherry petals
startle a sleepy koi
Cheryl Ashley
Nanaimo, British Columbia
-
perfectly stuck
a small pink petal
on my cat’s bum
Claudia Bos
Vancouver, British Columbia
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cherry bough lets loose
a shower of petals—
a wren has landed!
Gail Buente
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
with gnarled limbs
again the old man walks
beneath cherry blossoms
Gail Buente
Vancouver, British Columbia
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distant siren—
amid the fallen blossoms
shattered glass
Susan Constable
Nanoose Bay, British Columbia
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SPECIAL DELIVERY!
pink cherry petals
nestled in the mail
Karen Crawford
Surrey, British Columbia
-
reading quietly
under the cherry tree
scattered blossoms
Anne Dunnett
North Vancouver, British Columbia
-
sakura
the dandelion wine
still a little green
Garry Eaton
Port Moody, British Columbia
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Clouded by blossoms—
chewing gum vanishes
from the sidewalks.
Holly Flauto Salmon
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
her metastasis
storm removes the last
blossom
andrea gradidge
Burnaby, British Columbia
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old wounds
but, for a while
cherry blossoms
Ann Harreby
Coquitlam, British Columbia
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anointed with petals
I click my heels
and am young again
neil hershfield
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
perfume sales
cherry blossom tattoo
on her arm
Harvey Jenkins
Nanaimo, British Columbia
-
cherry blossoms
my baby cries
for her rattle
Harvey Jenkins
Nanaimo, British Columbia
-
surprise
small fists full—
cherry blossoms
Barbara Little
Burnaby, British Columbia
-
cherry blossoms—
the scarecrow
turns pink
Barbara Little
Burnaby, British Columbia
-
stowaway petal
in a little girl’s hair
just along for the ride
Tara Lowry
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
mother-to-be
the branch is heavy
with blossoms
Fiona Marion
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
broken branch
your blossoms fall
too early
Louise Moon
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Watching the petals fall
Drift to the ground
Memories of childhood.
Andrea Munro
Maple Ridge, British Columbia
-
spring equinox—
bowing cherries
border the graves
Nadia Sukhdeo Proctor
Burnaby, British Columbia
-
crawling up the bark
on a cherry blossom tree
the ant makes its’ way
Alexandra Regehr
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Cherry blossoms—
snow angels
in spring
Vicky Renneberg
Victoria, British Columbia
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Final exams.
Through the window I see
sun and cherry blossoms.
Vicky Rizzardo
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
young girl with a basket
her smile overflowing—
cherry blossoms
Sophia Rosenberg
Lasqueti Island, British Columbia
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this stillness . . .
the sound of one
white petal
jill stanley
Victoria, British Columbia
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Cherry petals
dot my sun,
my feet.
Rosemarie Teleron
Vancouver, British Columbia
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Rustled by the wind
another petal is lost—
my apologies
Dave Walcott
Surrey, British Columbia
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Blossoms in my hands
I stitch a quilt
Of memories
Jill Warner
Surrey, British Columbia
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blossom petals
at the breakfast table
—already full
Joyce Wong
Richmond, British Columbia
Canada
Sakura Awards
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a row of sandals
on the park bench—
petals everywhere
-
its deep shade
an aged cherry tree
in full bloom
Kimiko Horne
St. Catharines, Ontario
-
in his book of poems
long after
her cherry petals
Marilyn Potter
Toronto, Ontario
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a pink petal
curls
in my daughter’s hair
Sonia Saikaley
Ottawa, Ontario
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dawn rain
the baglady’s blanket
of cherry blossoms
Grant Savage
Ottawa, Ontario
-
touch of cherry blossoms
how far has it fallen
this starlight?
Grant Savage
Ottawa, Ontario
-
still there today
cherry blossoms
grave diggers
Guy Simser
Ottawa, Ontario
Honourable Mentions
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so easily
trodden underfoot
cherry blossoms
Peter Brady
Gatineau, Quebec
-
stripped of blossoms
the cherry tree
and me
Peter Brady
Gatineau, Quebec
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April showers—
a light dusting
of cherry petals
Pamela Cooper
Montreal, Quebec
-
along the footpath
cherry blossom petals
my pink pedicure
Ellen Cooper
Montreal, Quebec
-
your each
step to the door
a cherry petal drops
LeRoy Gorman
Napanee, Ontario
-
cherry blossoms
the moon and I face
each other
Chen-ou Liu
Ajax, Ontario
-
cupping
and cupping again
cherry blossoms
Terra Martin
Toronto, Ontario
-
renewing vows
under the cherry tree
petals in our hair
Joanne Morcom
Calgary, Alberta
-
missing her
the bitter cherry
and its bloom
Roland Packer
Hamilton, Ontario
-
air full of eagles
the blossoms
falling
Patrick M. Pilarski
Edmonton, Alberta
-
an indigo sky
cherry blossoms
in my hands
Sonia Saikaley
Ottawa, Ontario
-
cherry blossoms
on the breeze
chasing butterflies
Sylvia Santiago
Calgary, Alberta
-
cherry blossoms
a child’s laughter
disappears with the wind
Sylvia Santiago
Calgary, Alberta
United States
Sakura Awards
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blossoms in peak bloom—
I, too, could risk
everything
Susan Antolin
Walnut Creek, California
-
first blossoms . . .
my daughter and I
talk until dusk
Francine Banwarth
Dubuque, Iowa
-
day of blossoms—
a nurse erases
mother’s name
Roberta Beary
Washington, District of Columbia
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blossoms
other people’s children
catch them now
Roberta Beary
Washington, District of Columbia
-
at the altar
a cherry petal falls
from her sole
brett brady
Pahoa, Hawaii
-
daydreaming . . .
a cherry petal
brushes my cheek
Alice Frampton
Seabeck, Washington
-
leaving home . . .
what little I know
of cherry blossoms
Alice Frampton
Seabeck, Washington
-
the soldier’s wife
bruised cherry blossoms
in her hand
Terri French
Huntsville, Alabama
-
my son
gone before me—
cherry blossom tattoo
Terri French
Huntsville, Alabama
-
bright cherry blossoms
four generations
pose for the photo
Garry Gay
Santa Rosa, California
-
rescued from the grass—
fallen blossoms fill
my daughter’s hands
C. R. Manley
Bellevue, Washington
-
cherry blossoms
ten thousand
why nots
Scott Mason
Chappaqua, New York
-
cherry blossoms
a tourist
asks for directions
John Merryfield
Tahoe City, California
-
cherry petals
the way he touches
my scar
Melissa Spurr
Joshua Tree, California
Honourable Mentions
-
cherry blossoms
a thrush reminds me
to follow my heart
Francine Banwarth
Dubuque, Iowa
-
cherry blossoms
the ink of her tattoo
still bright
Jeanette Blain
Bronx, New York
-
farmers market
cherry blossom branches
at each stall
Jeanette Blain
Bronx, New York
-
cherry blossoms . . .
a slender moon barely
slipping through
brett brady
Pahoa, Hawaii
-
picking up speed
the cherry petal
that touched her lips
Beate Conrad
Waterford, Michigan
-
her last breath—
a cherry blossom falls
without notice
Rise Daniels
Tolland, Connecticut
-
cherry blossom petals—
the street gutters never
looked so pretty
Seren Fargo
Bellingham, Washington
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he rides
a girls’ pink bicycle—
blossom rain
Carolyn Hall
San Francisco, California
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kissing
the tip of each toe
cherry blossoms
Michele L. Harvey
Hamilton, New York
-
e-mail to Iraq
I attach a new photo
of cherry blossoms
Catherine J. S. Lee
Eastport, Maine
-
cherry blossom
seen through
cherry blossoms
Mary LeViant
Bellevue, Washington
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last year’s dress
with a new sash—
cherry blossoms
Peggy Lyles
Tucker, Georgia
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ocean breeze
cherry blossoms sail
across the pond
C. R. Manley
Bellevue, Washington
-
my wife forgives me—
today, remembering only
the cherry blossoms
Michael McClintock
Clovis, California
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cherry blossoms
and night’s heavy dew
blankets the young grass
Dorothy McLaughlin
Somerset, New Jersey
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children writing haiku
scatter in the park—
cherry petals
Marilyn Murphy
Providence, Rhode Island
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the park
after curfew—
cherry petals gathering
Marilyn Murphy
Providence, Rhode Island
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in the fold
of my kimono—
a dried cherry blossom
Nancy Nitrio
Orangevale, California
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wind gust
the cherry petals’
arpeggio
Origa (Olga Hooper)
Okemos, Michigan
-
some of the words
between us
cherry buds
Stephen A. Peters
Bellingham, Washington
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blossomless
above an open casket—
cherry tree
-
the puppy asleep
on a bed of blossoms
family picnic
Carol Raisfeld
Atlantic Beach, New York
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cherry blossoms
a bull rider’s hand
in the suicide wrap
Chad Lee Robinson
Pierre, South Dakota
-
for a few days
the war stops
cherry blossoms
Carolyne Rohrig
Fremont, California
-
in the cherry tree
I see the shape
of your hand
Carole Sauter
Kent, Washington
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April morning
a light drizzle
of cherry blossoms
Adelaide B. Shaw
Millbrook, New York
-
falling blossoms—
the swirl of her dress
as she spins
Adelaide B. Shaw
Millbrook, New York
-
prolonged illness
a newspaper brings me
cherry blossoms
Tim Singleton
Columbia, Maryland
-
a frog hops
through the rain
cherry petals
carmi soifer
Suquamish, Washington
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morning
without cherry blossoms—
emergency room
carmi soifer
Suquamish, Washington
-
cherry blossom time
a single petal
on the old dog’s nose
John Stone
Elverta, California
-
cherry blossoms . . .
a family strolls
hand in hand in hand
Marilyn Appl Walker
Madison, Georgia
-
first blossoms
the precise fit of air
in my bicycle tires
Marilyn Appl Walker
Madison, Georgia
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a cherry tree branch
broken off by the storm—
my son’s magic wand
Neal Whitman
Pacific Grove, California
-
pink
under the cherry tree
my toes
Kath Abela Wilson
Pasadena, California
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cherry blossoms
leaving the hospital
alone
Nora Wood
Lawrenceville, Georgia
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gas station puddle—
in its gaudy rainbow
cherry petals float
Ruth Yarrow
Seattle, Washington
International
Sakura Awards
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fluttering
on the trampoline
cherry blossoms
Bouwe Brouwer
Emmeloord, The Netherlands
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weeping cherry . . .
all the love
we’re in
Helen Buckingham
Bristol, England
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first cherry buds
she decides
to speak openly
Andrea Cecon
Cividale del Friuli, Italy
-
cherry blossom tattoo
she shows him
the hidden branch
Maria Kowal-Tomczak
Opole, Poland
-
cherry blossom chill—
I tie my shoelace
in a double bow
Emiko Miyashita
Kawasaki, Japan
-
rest home window
cherry blossoms fade
against the pane
Patricia Prime
Auckland, New Zealand
-
blossoming cherries—
faced to the window
an empty chair
Dorota Pyra
Gdansk, Poland
-
night rain
a tideline
of petals
Elaine Riddell
Hamilton, New Zealand
-
saying yes
to your proposal—
cherry blossoms
Katrina Shepherd
Dunblane, Scotland
-
cherry blossom—
he knows what to call
his granddaughter
Sandra Simpson
Tauranga, New Zealand
-
changing our sheets—
cherry blossom
drifts to the floor
Helen Yong
Christchurch, New Zealand
Honourable Mentions
-
cherry blossoms . . .
the smallest child
circles the tree trunk
Leonie Bingham
Nimbin, Australia
-
huddled trenchcoats
in the shadows . . .
cherry blossoms
Greg Bingham
Nimbin, Australia
-
cherry blossoms
filled to the rim
the candy jar
Bouwe Brouwer
Emmeloord, The Netherlands
-
cherry petals
cover your footprints—
this loneliness
Nathalie Buckland
Nimbin, Australia
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Breath of wind . . .
so many cherry petals
across the water
Magdalena Dale
Bucharest, Romania
-
homeward bound—
cherry blossoms stick
to my sandals
Angelee Deodhar
Chandigarh, India
-
Cherry blossoms—
a lonely woman smiling
at the window
Adina Enachescu
Râmnicu-Vâlcea, Romania
-
the dog
chases a new scent—
cherry blossom
Keith Frentz
Tauranga, New Zealand
-
early morning
people going to work
over cherry petals
Zeljko Funda
Varazdin, Croatia
-
end of jogging—
a cherry petal
stuck on my shoe
Damien Gabriels
Leers, France
-
in remission
seeing cherry blossom
she blossoms
Kevin Goldstein-Jackson
Poole, England
-
cherry tree
and my grandpa
full of petals
Dubravko Korbus
Ivanic Grad, Croatia
-
spring slips away
cherry petals
on the hearse
Artur Lewandowski
Sieradz, Poland
-
a short time
for love—my car strewn
with cherry petals
Tomislav Maretic
Zagreb, Croatia
-
cherry blossoms—
repainting my kitchen
pink
Jacek Margolak
Kielce, Poland
-
after the storm
a broken cherry’s bough
hangs and blossoms
Dusko Matas
Zagreb, Croatia
-
cherries blossom
a little boy tousles
grandfather’s grey hair
Boris Nazansky
Zagreb, Croatia
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urban boulevard
in a beggar’s hat
cherry petals
Robert Nowak
Wałbrzych, Poland
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Light sifted
through the drizzle—
cherry tree in blossom
Oprica Padeanu
Bucharest, Romania
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family album
our faces changing
under the blossom trees
Vanessa Proctor
Sydney, Australia
-
walking home from ballet
my daughter pirouettes
through the blossom
Vanessa Proctor
Sydney, Australia
-
a kid in combat trousers
every pocket
full of cherry petals
Dorota Pyra
Gdansk, Poland
-
cherry blossoms
again and again
I see her face
-
cherry tree flower
washed away with rain
again in the sunshine
Karol Rosiak
Bydgoszcz, Poland
-
villagers slow down
passing by the only
Japanese cherry
Stjepan Rozic
Ivanic Grad, Croatia
-
bouncing higher
on the trampoline—
cherry petals
Katrina Shepherd
Dunblane, Scotland
-
a policeman
directing traffic . . .
cherry blooms on his cap
Huguette Simmonds
Rodez, France
-
hisssssss
goes the soda can
cherry blossom
Valeria Simonova-Cecon
Cividale del Friuli, Italy
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Evening wind—
an old woman follows
the cherry petals
Eduard Tara
Iasi, Romania
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Two petals
falling together—
evening wind
Maria Tirenescu
Cugir, Romania
-
even an old lady
passing under the cherry
blossoming . . .
Djurdja Vukelic-Rozic
Ivanic Grad, Croatia
-
shutter clicks open
to the spring
first cherry flower
Diana Webb
Leatherhead, England
-
cherry blossoms
on the last page—
diary of a veteran
Urszula Wielanowska
Kielce, Poland
-
broken sundial—
a cherry blossom petal
drifts and lands
Sheila Windsor
Worcester, England
-
arms akimbo—
a cherry blossom falls
on my tilted face
Quendryth Young
Alstonville, Australia
-
blossom jam—
a tour bus topped
with pink
Quendryth Young
Alstonville, Australia
Youth
Sakura Awards
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sparring children
on the park bench
cherry blossoms
Sophie Kirkby, age 10
Nimbin, Australia
-
cherry blossoms
a young child nibbles
the flower
Sophie Kirkby, age 10
Nimbin, Australia
-
my sad eyes
under a cherry tree
lots of petals
Karolina Rosiak, age 10
Bydgoszcz, Poland
-
the wind
brushing tears away—
cherry blossoms
Sherry Zhou, age 12
Vancouver, British Columbia
Honourable Mentions
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Colourful flowers
shower me on my birthday
everything blooms
Jungwun (Mimi) Bang, age 12
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Rainy spring day
my reflection in puddles
scattered blossoms
Jessica Chang, age 15
Surrey, British Columbia
-
I’d like to catch one
a cherry blossom petal
to keep forever
Gabriella Dionne, age 17
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Amongst tall buildings
And noisy city bustle
Cherry blossoms bloom
Emma Dixon, age 15
Delta, British Columbia
-
sometimes, with the wind,
I drift . . .
like petals from a cherry tree
Yu Ting (Tina) Fan, age 14
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Pink cherry blossoms,
on a big beautiful tree,
swirling in the wind.
Selena Herrera, age 8
Richmond, British Columbia
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Cherry blossoms
pink trees everywhere
can’t see streets
arian jacobs, age 14
West Vancouver, British Columbia
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Pink cherry blossoms—
ballerinas pirouette
and tutus twirl
Elizabeth Li, age 12
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Walking home lonely
Among this sea of petals
These blooming trees.
Jaymee Maaghop, age 14
Surrey, British Columbia
-
cherry blossoms
a gentle pink wave
washes away sorrow
Winnie Mui, age 13
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
My dog done a pee
on a little cherry tree
oh deary deary me.
Abbie O Boyle, age 8
Dublin, Ireland
-
down on the sidewalk
poor blossom petals
turning into grey dust
Jane Qiu, age 15
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
I take a bite of taco,
and realize it had
cherry blossoms
Bill Tang, age 10
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Cherry blossoms make
a miniature tornado,
spinning in my yard.
Shannon Tang, age 11
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
Cherry blossoms
Shooting down the river,
Sinking in the rapids.
Emma Upsdell-Reddekopp, age 10
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
an empty bench
a warm kiss lingers
in cherry petals
Michael Warne, age 17
Vancouver, British Columbia
-
blushing
when being admired—
cherry blossoms
Sherry Zhou, age 12
Vancouver, British Columbia
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